The Secret Language of Comics: Visual Thinking and Writing

Sawyer Steinmiller: My Averagely Average Bag

As shown in the title, my bag is averagely average. There is nothing too crazy in there, but it does get extremely heavy. When I carry it throughout campus, I think to myself that I am helping my core, but I really do not think that much progress has been made. Starting from the top, there is the bag itself. When school shopping, I chose a grey backpack as to not contrast my outfits. I thought that grey pretty much goes with anything and I stand by that. I didn’t want to stand out too much, adding to the averagely average vibe. On the bag are two Pokemon pins and a Pokemon key chain. I added these small trinkets as a means to start conversation. Nerds in the video game community try not to out themselves, and these trinkets might encourage someone to talk about gaming without me having to expose myself. Surprisingly, this plan has worked extremely well, and I have gotten many compliments. My physics lab binder is to the left of my backpack. I placed it front and center because physics lab is my favorite class. The Best We Could Do is next to the binder solely for organizational purposes. The calculator might be the least average item in my bag. The pink color really contrasts the vibe my bag gives off; it was my sisters in high school. I have grown to love it, and it has also received a lot of compliments. Next are my notebooks- the first one is my green physics notebook (green keeping the theme). The red notebook are my notes for my class on comics (this class). I chose red because English courses always seemed like a ‘red’ or ‘yellow’ class but the Barnes and Noble didn’t have any yellow notebooks. The black notebook is my Econ notebook; I chose black because I always think of black suits when I think of Economics. Last but not least is my blue math notebook. In my mind, blue has always been the color associated with math. Below are my folders. I only have three folders because not that many of my classes give individual papers. The red and blue folders are color correspondents with their respective notebooks, but I had to buy a white folder for physics because Barnes and Noble did not have green. In between my folders are my scattered pens and pencils. I came to college with one pencil and have grown my arsenal throughout the semester by finding spares on the floor. In high school, I was the guy who never had a pencil going into class, but I have always had one at the ready in college. Under my folders is my dongle. Honestly, I still haven’t used it, but I have a sneaky suspicion that it will come in handy in the future. In the bottom right is my Econ textbook; I really hate Econ. Honestly, I still haven’t opened that textbook yet and the midterm is Monday, October 21st. In the middle is my PACE book. I personally think that PACE is super useless and I always forget to do the surveys. Last and least is health. Health is my least favorite class because the entire thing is just memorization. I stayed up way too late for many nights studying the test, and I still probably did poorly on it. I thought it was super ironic how the class preaches getting sleep, but I essentially had to stay up late because I am really bad at memorizing things.

Is representing yourself in a catalog of the stuff in your bag a type of writing? Why or why not?

This image is not really representative of me as a person from at outside perspective, but it really does describe me. I try and give off the image of an extreme extrovert who doesn’t care about what other people think. While I am still an extrovert, I care immensely about what others think, and carefully craft each conversation I have to show a better me. I know it sounds very fake, but it is actually something that I am very proud of. Verbal communication is my best skill, and I am not afraid to use it to my advantage (that sounded evil but I am not- I promise). My communication strategies can be seen through the trinkets on my backpack and my dongle. The trinkets on my backpack show how I try and start certain conversations and the dongle is also there as a backup. If anyone needs one (which many people do), I have one just in case. While making the image itself, I tried to be as organizational as possible; this hopefully made it visually pleasing. This assignment was surprisingly not challenging at all. I thought that the description would be very difficult and I would have to make some lame parallels to my life, but that was not the case. The connections came easily to me, and I had a lot of fun. Representing myself in a catalog was a type of writing because it gave a new and unique outlet to describe myself. Normally, people show things about themselves through their actions but this was totally different.

Here is a link to the assignment prompt!

My Bag of Tricks

  • Solo New York Backpack- I chose this backpack because it has a lot of storage space and I can use it in 3 different ways: as a suitcase, an over the shoulder bag, and a regular backpack.
  • HP Envy X360 Laptop– I needed a laptop for college and so I saved up my money from my summer job to get it.
  • Chem150L Notebook– I have chemistry lab on Wednesday, but I kept it in this long because I like to work on my post lab assessments throughout the course of the week.
  • TI-84 Plus CE Calculator– I usually have to do calculations for my chemistry and math courses, so a calculator is an efficient way to do all of the math involved.
  • 3 Subject Notebook– Instead of having to purchase individual spirals and folders, I decided to invest in a 5 star 3 subject notebook for convenience and space usage. It has pockets which act like folders and paper which is sectioned off into 3 parts.
  • Health Textbook- I was studying for my Health quiz and completely forgotten to take it out after I had finished the class for the week.
  • Blistex– I don’t want to have chapped lips now that the weather is changing and so I decided to purchase some chap-stick to prevent that from occurring.
  • Water, Nature Valley Bar, and utensils– I usually have to get a quick breakfast in before class so the water and granola bars are a go-to staple, and the utensils are for when I have to take my lunch on the go before I have to get to work at 2 P.M.
  • Phone Portable Charger– Sometimes when I have been on my phone for too long I like to use my portable charger so that I am able to stay connected to the web longer.

I feel like this photograph is very representative of me because I like to have supplies for convenience more than having them to show their value. They are also indicative of my constant on the go mindset, where any chance I can to do work or do something productive I will. I chose to put the things that had more usage for me on the forefront of the photo while the things I used least often towards the back. This assignment felt by far the easiest that we have had so far because I only had to explain the reasons for having certain items in my backpack. Yes, representing myself through the items in my bag is a type of personal writing because I get to reflect on why it is I need something and how it will aid me in my daily endeavors.
Link Back to the assignment Prompt: https://eng181f19.davidmorgen.org/assignments/sketches/sketch-6-whats-in-your-bag/

Com(packed) Essentials

Items Pictured Listed in Clockwise Order, Starting from the Bottom Corner

  • Fjäll Räven Kånken Backpack: a Swedish hiking brand that reminds me of my routes; I’ve been told by friends it’s proportionally much to small for me, and I don’t disagree, but it works for me
  • Macbook Air: a day-to-day essential
  • 2019 Planner: useful for organization, at least when I actually write stuff in it
  • Latin folder: holds my print outs and translations, which I’d be hopeless without
  • Spiral-bound Latin notebook: where I take my notes in class, when I’m not feeling lazy
  • “O Tempora O Mores” Latin Text with Commentary: I usually keep this with me so I can review passages if I ever have free time because it’s impossible to review too much for Latin
  • TI-84 Calculator: even though I have it with me, I usually just use the calculator on my computer
  • Muji Pencil Case, filled with Muji Pens & Pencils: from my favorite stationary store; writing with my preferred pen or pencil makes such a difference for me
  • NaCl Salt Pills: I take these for my low blood pressure and without them I’d sleep 18 hours a day
  • Burt’s Bees Lip Balm: I always need it when I don’t have any, so I just keep it with me
  • Pill-Shaped Pill Case: holds all my heart pills, which I have to take twice a day; every time I see it I smile because I like it so much
  • Hair Ties: always handy for when I forget to bring one to lab
  • ZipLock of Gauze Pads: needed after my sinus surgery
  • Medical Tape: for taping on the gauze
  • ENT Appointment Card: you’re probably sensing a medicinal theme here, and you’d be correct if you gathered that I was a rather sickly person
  • “K1N9DOM” Water bottle: a graduating gift from the junior class; I always carry it so I can stay hydrated to keep my blood pressure up without having to ever buy a plastic water bottle, the idea of which irks the environmentalist within me

On my first attempt of this assignment I actually laid out the items on a plain background, but when I realized I had forgotten to include my backpack and needed to redo it, I decided to try to be more creative in my artistic presentation by laying everything out on my geometrically patterned rug. I found that the image was most interesting when the grid was kept at a 45 degree angle from the sides of the image, instead of rotating it to make the grid lines parallel to the frame of the photo. When I look at the end result, I am surprised at what an accurate self-portrait it is, since it effectively captures a lot of my individual daily routines. As I discussed in my Avatar post (Sk1), chronic sickness has been a considerable influence in my life, so it seemed appropriate that my medicines and other illness-related items were prominent in the photo. Cataloguing the items in my bag was a writing assignment that I was unfamiliar with, since I typically think of writing assignments as taking paragraph form. Regardless of my past notions, I would consider this a writing assignment because when writing the descriptions of my items, I attempted to make the commentary humorous and utilized literary techniques to do so.

A Sack-o-Stuff

Hey, look, it’s a bag of things! My bag of things, to be exact. And what exciting items do I carry on a daily basis?

A lovely spread of stuff, courtesy of Dean Criser
  1. Some headphones, in case there’s every an ambulation in need of a soundtrack
  2. Whatever literature which pertains to my current classes
  3. A powerful computer mostly used for word processing
  4. Some 5 Gum and Altoids, because one is for the long haul and the other for short study sessions, respectively
  5. A pen and highlighter I almost never use, because pencils are too convenient for my numerous mistakes
  6. And finally, two notebooks — for notes on books

Since I’d like to think of myself as a somewhat interesting individual, I pray that this bland assortment of sorts is not too representative of who I actually am. If textbooks weren’t so heavy, maybe I’d have the available back strength to carry around a few cool nick-nacks, but alas I can only muster the barest collection of academic necessities.

Despite this, the assignment as a whole was relatively easy, and I guess a little personality shines through in my headphones. I will admit, I was slightly saddened when I was forced to remove those beautiful Bose bass-masters for a mere few seconds when taking that photo; I was listening to a rather great song. I know they’re not necessary for classwork, but a few ounces are a small price to pay for salvation — and music.

Purse So Heavy Sans The Oprah Dollars

  • Ibuprofen – which I took 20 capsules in the past weekend.
  • CeraVe face wash – a useful remnant of my consecutive couch surfing/sleepovers from the past week.
  • 5 foot iPhone Charger – an object made virtually obsolete by the lack of LTE available in the wilderness
  • Tube of hydrocortisone – in case any mosquitoes mistake my presence for a dinner invite.
  • Black Crew Socks – a useless remnants of jazz III class supplies.
  • Wallet – silk, shiny, completely adorable al for only 20 dollars!
  • Sunglasses and Case – I think these were 10 dollars at UAL. Total steal.
  • Organic Lip Balm – one of the few non-homemade lip balms I own.
  • MILK MAKEUP KUSH High Volume Mascara – because I got it like that
  • Too Faced Foundation and Concealer – because being in nature doesn’t mean going all natural.. feel me?
  • Journal, Pencil, and Pen – tools for reflection and documenting my time.
  • AirPods – just in case things get dull on the road on in the cabin.
  • Shea Moisture Balancing Moisturizer – because I was not about to let that woodsy air dry my skin out
  • Hair Gel, Eyebrow, and Edge Brush – to keep it LAID.
  • 2 Scrunchies – adding a lil POP of color to any outfit.
  • Rose-scented body spray – to keep it fresh in the forest. I thought it would help me integrate myself into nature into nature more by smelling like it. I don’t think I was totally wrong about that.
  • Shea Moisture Braid Oil – to keep my hair so fresh and so clean.
  • Water Bottle – gets me compliments/keeps me hydrated.
  • Umbrella – because I don’t take chances with rain.

My typical purse for this week was packed for quite atypical adventures. From couch surfing through about three different dorms to a weekend wilderness retreat, I’ve done many things I’ve never done before this week, and my bag stocked full of daily necessities and a couple toiletries reflects that. The contents of my purse showcase more utilities related to caring for my outsides than my insides. I don’t usually carry around this much makeup with me (just mascara if I have a long day ahead of me) but with all the time I spent not sleeping in my own dorm my purse doubled as my toiletries this week. That being said, I still do think this picture represents a lot about me. The only thing that would complete it would be more stickers and Hot Tamales as I consider those items to be absolutely essential to my person (If I go ONE WEEK without my Hot Tamales fix my internal organs start to shut down). I loved the assignment this week. The hardest part was trying to make the picture as aesthetically pleasing as the ones you see on Pinterest. I didn’t accomplish that goal but I feel I came reasonably close. As for an autobiographical work, listing items with description does count as “writing”.

I Probably Have it in My Bag

The extent of actual school work in my bag is a math notebook and book for class. Everything else is very random but practical at the same time. For my electronics, I have chargers, dongles and my AirPods. I also have a lot of vaseline because my lips get very chapped. I am also prone to frequent headaches which explains the travel packets of Advil. Finally, for some bizarre reason, I have a little travel kit with nail clippers, scissors, and some pliers.

This Sunday sketch is only our second sketch about self reflection, the other one being the avatar, however I found really helpful. With the avatar post I had to think about how to represent myself and then make something. However with this post, the stuff that represents me was already there, and all I had to do was dump it out onto the floor. That’s why, I think this photo above, of the contents of my backpack really does justice as a self reflective post. Mainly because I think it shows the type of person I am. I like to think that I am very organized and I try to always have “essential” items on me at all times. For example for this backpack, the first pocket is for medical stuff like Advil, tissues, and vaseline. Then the second pocket is all technology and chargers. And the last two pockets are for books and school work. This Sunday sketch was also a lot of fun, becasue it was cool to see my classmates bags and what they have with them all the time. Although we have been in school now for over a month, I still don’t know everyone that well, and this gave me a better insight into who they are.

Heavy For A Reason

  • Dark Blue Backpack: I bought this backpack immediately when I saw it in the store. It’s very practical with A LOT OF zipper pockets which I can put all my stuff in without having them tangled together. I just discovered that it’s Emory blue, which makes me like it more.
  • An Emory Hat: I wouldn’t have survived the summer without this hat. The sun was burning and I would definitely faint from the heat without it protecting my skin. It is surprisingly useful even in the fall because it just saved me from the rain today.
  • MacBook Pro: I got it over the summer for college and I decorated it with Emory stickers because I think they are cute. It sometimes makes my bag extremely heavy and gets incredibly hot and noisy whenever I open the Steam app. It just wants to see me studying.
  • Beats Headphones: it didn’t come with the computer because of some weird policies of the Apple store in my country. It is supposed to be wireless but my computer just can’t pair with it through Bluetooth and I forget to bring the wire all the time, so it just lies in my bag, adding meaningless weight.
  • Water Bottle: I wanted to get an Emory water bottle in the bookstore but they were not good-looking so I kept this old one. It got this metallic exterior which is so cool. It can be super heavy when filled with water.
  • My Philosophy and Art History pouch folder: I have Art History class right after Philosophy so I just put their hand-outs together in one folder.
  • Pencil Case: I’ve used it for three years and I can’t love it more. It houses all my pens, markers, and color pencils since I need multiple colors when drawing (sometimes on my notebooks during class:)
  • My Emory card and room key: One of the most important things in my bag. Without it I would be locked out in the wind and loosing probably a hundred bucks. I always think that it might not be a good idea to tie them together because if I lose I lose both, but I’m too lazy to make a change.
  • A Twizzler: How could it still be in my bag??! My friend gave it to me during the summer and I literally forgot to eat it until now.
  • My Wallet: carrying it with me makes me feel safe even though I don’t really need it on campus.
  • A Lipstick: It’s a very bad idea to carry a lipstick in bag under the Atlanta sun – it melted once and I put it in the refrigerator for a night to get it back in shape.
  • Some tissue: I developed this habit of carrying some tissue around in my bag when I was in China since we don’t usually have free tissue in the restaurants. It brings me the reputation of always being well-prepared  whenever my friends spill their drinks on themselves. 
  • A watch: I don’t really wear it because I can always check the time on my phone and somehow I don’t think it is comfortable to type wearing a watch.

I never figured out why my bag was so heavy until I emptied all the stuff out. There are about half of these things that I don’t need to carry with me everyday but I just do. I surprisingly found that I have a personal story with every object in my bag even though I just consider them as my daily necessities that I never really pay attention to. Therefore, to a certain extent, they do tell a lot about me as a person. Looking at the picture, I realize most of my belongings are blue because it’s such a chill color that makes me feel cozy, which also speaks of me as an easy-going and low-key person. I also find that I like being well-equipped even though that means more weight on me. And that is exactly me in terms of always being ready and prepared. Besides, it shows the caring side of me because even if I don’t need tissue that often, I will always carry some with me since people around might need it. I’m always willing to help!

I don’t think this is a hard assignment and the image-creating process was very simple as well. I just needed to empty out all the contents, and words just naturally flowed out when describing them, and of course myself. I definitely think this is a type of writing since I’m conveying information through my words with a careful thinking process. Not only do we need to explain the items but we should also present them as representatives of ourselves, which needs a thoughtful and logical construction of language. Drawing connections between two originally unrelated concepts (in this case items in my bag and my personality) and generating a new idea from that can also be an essential feature of writing. 

Bag Book

  • Laptop – pretty much take this everywhere.
  • Textbooks/Notebooks – I carry these because I have to.
  • Eraser – this stays at the bottom of my bag permanently.
  • Calculator – yeah…just a calculator.
  • Pick/Comb – gotta stay strapped.
  • Roll-on – for those moments…
  • Pencils & Pens – essential.
  • Vaseline – lips must stay un-chapped.
  • Apple Earbuds/Charger – very essential to my everyday lifestyle.
  • Computer mouse – I think I annoy people in the library with my clicks.

I believe that this image represents me up to a certain extent. Of course, it’s almost impossible to be able to completely represent a person through their belongings however, they do give a glimpse into what an individual is like. I would say that this image represents me at a very surface level as there aren’t really any very definitive items that would hint at a certain passion or interest that I have. I consider most if not all of the items in this image quite common items that a lot of people carry around also. Creating this image was simple as well and I didn’t have any significant challenges as I did so. The most difficult part of the assignment (which wasn’t really that difficult) would be adding the little descriptions next to each of the items.

To me, anything written that allows the writer to be able to express themselves can be considered a form of writing, and a catalog of items that represents one’s self, even if the representation is not actually true, definitely fits this criteria.

But Most Importantly…

Image of Backpack and What Is Usually In It

My backpack includes:

  • Coral Umbrella
  • Chemistry Lab Manual
  • Safety Goggles
  • Pink Planner
  • Pen/Pencil Holder (including the pens and pencils in it)
  • Laptop
  • The Great Pianist (for my seminar)
  • The Best We Could Do (for english)
  • Folders (Chemistry and QTM)
  • Health Book

The inside of my backpack is pretty simple. Most of that is from back problems and a class that is super far. But even then, I have the most important things in my bag. Even when I only have some classes one day a week, like Chemistry lab, I still keep the manual and classes in my bag at all times. I am really bad with keeping up with things so I make things easier on myself by always keeping something in the same place. I think this assignment has been the best assignment because I think it really shows who we are. Also I think you can always tell a persons headspace by their level of organization. Clutter means a cluttered mind and organized means an easygoing and peaceful mind. Thats another reason I keep my bag simple. College is a stressful place but I’m more focused on keeping my peace of mind.

THE DUDES

The dude(me): a backpack. 

The study dude: a laptop(MacBook).

The genius dude: a calculator.

The “I’ve got your back” dude: a wallet.

The annoying dude: a health book.

The tutor dude: an economics book.

The dude with all the tools: a pencil case.

The hungry dude: a nimko bag.

Without my backpack slowly but surely I would’ve lost my way. My backpack is to me as chocolate is to vanilla. I wouldn’t survive in today’s world without my backpack, let alone the first few weeks of college. My backpack is just like me in a way it is equipped, as am I, to deal with everyday problems. The backpack is a composition of several personality traits (items) just like me: a composition of dudes. I didn’t find the assignment to be challenging; it was easy to see my bag as a representation of myself. Constructing the image was a simple process as well. I laid out all the items in a systematic manner. Representing yourself as an object would be a type of writing, but I think it would fall more into the category of personification of objects than a representation of oneself.

The link to the assignment is here.

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