The Secret Language of Comics: Visual Thinking and Writing

Success vs. Doubt

Human Document by Ja’Mya Yancey

Determined Mrs.

Failure to excuse.

Destined to succeed.

Dissatisfied wish for selfish gratifications.

I went into this assignment thinking it would be difficult for me because I easily get lost in a page of words now that I’m used to graphic novels and comics. At first it was, but then I focused myself and began to dissect the pages I had. The poem I made is mostly talking about how you can at one point have such a positive view on your life and think you’re doing well and then another point you can think you’re spiraling out of control and not meeting any goals. This is often how I’ve felt throughout my few months in college so I felt very confident in my words. So confident I didn’t think any drawing in the background could add to the words alone so I just used color and a common symbol for success.

INFATUATION

She thinks me too meek

She had only to be what she is

She’s charming

She “acted”

A woman

And so other

It’s she who’s the real thing

Developed and deepened his personal existence

The link to the assignment can be found here.

Through the Window of Life

The creation of this visual poem has been my favorite assignment to date. I’ve always loved blackout poems and the idea of recycling the innovation of others into new and unique pieces of work. I have no idea what the real page had said before, but it is completely irrelevant because this is now something original and different that the author assisted me in creating. I chose statements in the original text that interested me and connected to one another in a compelling way. I feel that the poem I was able to form from this is actually quite strong and works well in context. Even though none of the lines had any relation in the original text they now come together to provide a new story and a deeper meaning to the page.

Painting is a very cathartic outlet for me. I do not consider myself to be very good, but it is something that I could do for hours on end and take pride in the work I complete even though it is no Van Gogh. This week’s assignment may have taken a little longer than usually for me because once I start painting it is difficult for me to find the proper place to stop without wanting to add more and more. The toughest part for me was ensuring the background words were adequately covered and keeping the paint off the words of my poem. Unfortunately, some paint seeped onto parts of my poem which I think lessens the effect and neatness of the work. However, overall I am pleased with the outcome and had an extremely enjoyable time putting my time and effort into the assignment this week. This Sunday Sketch allowed me to think creatively, utilize a medium that we have not had the chance to work with yet, and have fun in doing so.

A Long Trip

This week’s assignment is so far the most enjoyable one. The idea of picking out words and phrases from an existing page and rearranging them into a new poem is exciting yet challenging. I started with skimming through the entire page and underlining some words I might later use in my poem while reading. As I selected more and more words, I had a much clearer idea of what my poem was going to be like, and what message it was going to convey. I then framed the selected texts with irregular text bubbles.

The painting part was actually easy. Reading my poem over and over, I imagined two people, friends or couples, riding on a train going nowhere, just to get out of the place they’ve been living their entire lives. They had no plans for the future, nor did they have any money, but they trusted each other with all their heart. With this picture in mind, I drew a half-opened train window, along with the pretty view outside. I chose to use vibrant colors because they symbolize a bright new start and getting away from the dull past.

I think the biggest challenge is to make clear the order of the verses. Since the texts are all separate, I decided to link some of the text bubbles together to guide my readers. Even so, the reading sequence might still vary from person to person, but I don’t consider it a big problem since every reader can have their own unique experience and interpretation with my visual poem in this way.

Sketch 8: Human Document

Due: 10/27

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The British artist Tom Phillips is probably best known for a project that he began in 1966 and which he has continued ever since–he set himself the challenge to buy the first book he could find at a secondhand bookstore for threepence and to alter every page using drawing, painting, collage, and cut-up techniques to create an entirely new version.

He found W.H. Mallock’s A Human Document and combined the words in the title to create A Humument. Phillips not only created new art works from each of the 367 pages but has now completed five different editions of this altered book.

You can view pretty much the complete series of pages on Tom Phillips site here. You can choose pages, view the original and then view different versions of that page.

For this week’s assignment, I want you to create your own visual poem-thing. You can find your own page to alter if you’d like, but I’ll bring in an old used book that you can take pages from too. Think of it as sort of a collaboration between yourself and the book’s original author or think of it as a game where you get to create new text but within the strict confines of the text available on the page.

Obviously, Tom Phillips has been doing this for almost 50 years and I’m not expecting you to produce work that is as polished or complex as his – nor that is necessarily as visually compelling. And it will probably feel very strange to you as you begin, but just let yourself be playful and experiment with your task. You do not need to be a professional artist to make these pages, but you probably do need to be able to relax your desire to be in control of what you produce and you probably need to turn off the self-critical voice that will tell you that you’re doing it wrong.

Alter your page using whatever methods or tools you prefer, then scan the page in color at a high resolution as a JPG or PNG file and load it to your site. You might or might not include in your post the text of your altered page.

 

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