The Secret Language of Comics: Visual Thinking and Writing

Less Is More

My Bag

When I took things out of my bag, I was surprised by how under-utilized my backpack was. For all the classes, extra-curriculum, and daily life, a laptop, a tablet with an electronic pencil, a loose-leaf binder, stationery, a wallet, and a set of keys are enough. From this photograph, my self-portrait is a tech-savvy and open-minded person, embracing new technology and innovations. Getting rid of piles of books and paper, students from my generation that grow up with electronic devices tend to embrace the disruptive technological changes in our daily life. All my textbooks are stored in my laptop as pdf, and other reading materials are available through the online library. I take notes on my iPad, and the traditional loose-leaf binder is merely used to collect handouts and other hard copies. The wallet carries a little cash that serves only as emergency use. Credit cards still prevail, but online payments like Venmo and Apple Pay are changing the game. Overall, this image is very representative of me, as my budget is the only thing that will prevent me from upgrading the technology in my life. 

I believe that this kind of representation can be counted as a type of writing. First of all, like an author, I can choose what to be included in the photo. I have the power to lead my audience’s thoughts since they will not have information from other sources. Through adding and omitting information, it is feasible to create the representation that I want, just like shaping a character in writing. Nevertheless, the audience of this photograph will have their own interpretations of the items’ purposes. They cannot help but use their own experience with the specific item, like the laptop, to analyze the author’s use of that item. This kind of engagement is also similar to that of reading a text.

The Backpack Diaries

  • Big green backpack. Pretty color and amazing pocket space. Gives me back pain :/
  • Grey planner for an organized queen. I think I check it once a week. Oops
  • Some random books that are normally in my bag (shout out hlth 100 and pace go freshman!). No notebooks in photo, but normally notebooks in bag. Big notetaker over here
  • Giant overpowering water bottle because hydrate or die-drate and save the environment
  • Shades to block out the blinding Atlanta sun, not the haters (too basic a reference)
  • Way more writing utensils than I need. Pencils for the base of my doodles, pens to bolden outline the doodles, and highlighters to really make the doodles pop. Pens can also be used for annotation purposes I guess, maybe some notetaking here and there
  • Now, the necessities: gum (I normally go for fruity gum), air pods, lip gloss and chapstick, my room key, and one representational tampon (there are more)… go women!
  • Missing: my laptop…she was charging, sorry. She is a pain anyway because she makes the bag super heavy so I guess this is her punishment, sitting in the corner alone. 

Standing alone, my backpack is not the most representational of myself, but compared to other backpacks, it probably becomes clearer who I am. Part of what is meaningful about what is in my backpack is what isn’t in my backpack. I do not carry chargers around because I do not like to use my phone enough to drain it regularly. I do not carry around binders because I prefer notebooks and folders. I don’t carry around a hairbrush because I only brush it in the shower so it doesn’t frizz. My essentials are all crowded on the left (except my water bottle because I thought it looked more balanced on the right). Chapstick, air pods, my room key, and the not-so-controversial but still uncomfortable tampon. At first, I wasn’t going to include the tampon because I felt embarrassed, but then I thought, realistically this is one of the most important things I carry around and therefore it deserves to be seen and normalized. This assignment was challenging because I felt the backdrop (my dorm room floor) was limiting and ruined the aesthetic of the photo. I hoped that the arrangement would pop a little bit more because I left space in between the objects similar to the gutters in comics, but the multi-hued rug slightly took away from that. Still, I feel that representing myself through a photo of my “stuff” is a legitimate form of writing. I felt more comfortable using my sassy personality when describing the contents of my bag because I felt the photo spoke for itself. The saying “a picture is worth a thousand words” is exactly what this assignment is about.

Speeding

Sunday Sketch #5

One of the biggest choices I made while creating this comic was to not use dialogue. I chose to do this because as I was brainstorming I found it vey hard to tell such a short story and use dialogue. I began to think about the saying, “A picture speaks 1000 words”. This made me start thinking about how I could tell a story with just images. I knew I wanted to use a sign for the first panel because it was an easy way to communicate what setting the scene is taking place. Once I knew I was using a speed limit sign the rest of my idea followed.

This Sunday Sketch was a little different from anything we’ve done so far because in the past we’ve just created a single picture. Now, however, we have to combine 3 different pictures to create a story with a beginning, middle, and end. Personally, I prefer this because it forced me to think about both what I was drawing and how it would fit into something bigger, in this case the comic.

The Longest Distance

The Longest Distance vF.

The impact of smartphones and social media on interpersonal relationships has been a very popular topic in recent years. While some argue that technology facilitates communication over long distances, others point out that more and more people, especially those of our generation that have grown up with smartphones, are obsessed with social media and become unable to deal with face-to-face communications. Technology may hinder normal communications and create “the longest distance” between people.

The most difficult part is again the drawing process as I decided to push myself to practice drawing. No suitable pictures online made this process harder since I could not imitate others’ drawings. In addition to my iPad and Apple Pencil, I employed Photoshop and Powerpoint to edit my drawings and put them into panels. Overall, the creating process was fun if not that I had less time to spare for this assignment due to other midterms.

 

Assignment Link: https://eng181f19.davidmorgen.org/assignments/sketches/sketch-5-triptych/

Sweet Goodbyes (Sunday Sketch #5)

Sweet Goodbyes

At first I put way too much thought into this project. I wanted to make something truly artistic and deep and profound. Then I realized I was spending too much time thinking about it so I forced myself to start drawing and make it up from there. Here is my first, and quite frankly frightening, idea:

my first attempt…

For some reason this comic cracked me up. I couldn’t stop laughing. But for another, somehow unclear, reason I didn’t feel it was the right comic for this assignment. So then I settled for the strawberry idea. The main struggle I had was coming up with a quick three beat narrative that told a story. I think this is why I went first to a basic three line joke, and then later allowed the last beat of the comic to not include any words and stand alone as “just” an image. This assignment made me think rhythmically with my storytelling, which was a new experience for my written work. I am constantly thinking about rhythm when it comes to editing film, but usually that can stand separate from the story itself. Here, I was pleasantly challenged to merge the two to craft this stupid joke.

ASSIGNMENT PROMPT

Don’t Stop Retrieven

When I was crafting my comic I wanted to do something that was visually humorous, but also a philosophy that everyone should follow. Therefore, I chose the image of a dog chasing after a ball and another 3D image of a dog looking away to show someone being afraid or ignoring an opportunity that was presented to them. The challenge I faced in this assignment was trying to find a topic to base my comic off of. This is different from other writings that I’ve done because this time was forced to make one image tell a story in 3 scenes.

Sunday Sketch Assignment: https://eng181f19.davidmorgen.org/assignments/sketches/sketch-5-triptych/

Go To Mommy

This Sunday Sketch was different from the rest because I felt like it was the closest thing we have done to writing a comic. The past assignments have all incorporated drawing and visual aspects, however, I feel like doing this mini comic strip assignment is helping to prepare us for turning our literacy narratives into comics. I had a lot of fun with this Sunday Sketch, as the idea came to me pretty quickly. After reading the sketch description I knew I wanted to make it comedic but still have some sort of message. The idea for this, is a spin on when a child walks for the first time, often from one parent to another. However, in this example the child is dodging dangerous situations while trying to complete this task. He first wanders into the road and avoids getting hit by a car, and then barely misses a soccer ball to the head as it soars right above him. While all of this is happening, he is completely oblivious. In this sketch, wanted to address the bliss and care free attitude of a young child. They have nothing to worry about and no real world fears as they are growing up. They just live their life, and although its not practical to have this mentality forever, it is nice not to worry. The older you get the more and more worries and concerns you have. Many people don’t know where their next meal is coming from or where they are going to live. It really makes you want to go back to the times where ignorance was bliss and the world was literally your playground.https://eng181f19.davidmorgen.org/assignments/sketches/sketch-5-triptych/

When you’re going to outlive the Earth…

This is Amir! A 1 year old I babysat my last semester of high school.

This was by far the most challenging Sunday Sketch this semester. I knew I wanted to go in a comedic direction with this assignment. I saw the strip from “Nancy” heading the Sunday Sketch assignment page and immediately thought creating a funny triptych would be the most natural direction for me to go. I read comics like “Nancy” with my dad all the time growing up. Sunday paper comics are nostalgic to me, so I thought writing a triptych with those type of comics as inspiration would be easy. I was wrong. It’s been longer since I’ve sat with my dad after church to read the funnies than it has since I’ve spent hours scrolling through “relatable” Twitter pictures. That being said, while creating this comic, I felt strongly compelled to craft it like a meme. The impulse to create a meme and not a comic led to my decision to use from life photographs – reaction pictures.

The narrative I chose was inspired by an ongoing joke I have with my cousin. It’s a little pessimistic, but it’s real. The joke’s got some attitude; it’s politically charged, but it’s something that should be talked about like it’s a reality and not a ambiguous forecast.

WE KEEP ON WALKING

The concept of a triptych seemed pretty familiar to me as I used to make similar small sketches back in middle school. At first, I decided on drawing my triptych, but apparently, I found out that my drawing skills had deteriorated significantly so I settled on a photo. The photo consists of me and my friends walking up a hill in the Khunjerab park in northern Pakistan. Taking into consideration that of how much we were out of shape and how much of a grueling hike it was, reaching the top of the hill was seen as a noteworthy achievement. Crafting a triptych was different for me in a way that this time out sketch had to have some form of a story. This assignment, to me, felt more like constructing a “comic strip” than what the other assignments did. The basic composition process was fairly simple, I divided the photo into three separate parts and used Snapchat to add text to it.

The link to the assignment is here.

All for One and One for All

Image of my friends and I before a performance.

At the start of this weeks Sunday Sketch had me thinking for a long time. I really did not have a clue what I would use as a photo or what message I would convey. But I just took a second and scrolled through my camera roll and really looked to see what I could make out of some of them. Then I found this picture and it is both me in my element and me surrounded by those I love. To give more context to the photo itself, it was taken inside the dressing room for my high schools dance team which we were all a part of. The people in the photo are the other girls on the team who were in my particular grade. The night this was taken was Grammys night, a night where seniors perform as some celebrity and their background dancers can either be other seniors or underclassmen (which is where we stepped in). Since graduating I see that I really took moments like this for granted and pictures like this hit very close now.

The word choice I decided to use for this describes Renaissance High Schools Dance Workshop for the years I was on it. We all came from different backgrounds, different schools, different places within the state, but our bond was so close that none of that mattered and when we were together it was home. Before coming to the school and joining the team I would have never met any of these young women. Now it feels like I have known them my entire life. They bring nothing but joy into my life which is also represented in the image. We all came together with one purpose, dance. We developed one additional family for all of us and those to come.

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